The lead in any article is the toughest part of the whole idea.
I once buried a lead that still burns me up. I was in the Trenton Thunder clubhouse for Phil Coke's Yankees debut and the team was gathered around the television watching. I stood with them witnessing Coke's beginning in the big leagues.
For some odd reason, I stuck that in the final paragraph as the closing sentence. I still kick myself.
So when a baseball writer pens a lead that I think is absolutely perfect, I envy and admire.
Such was the case today with Philadelphia Daily News writer Paul Hagen's piece on the arrival of pitcher Cliff Lee to the Phillies.
"Well, he's here now," Hagen wrote.
This is no small story in Philadelphia. This is the THE BIGGEST Phillies story and possibly the first or second biggest in baseball. There's also that Roy Halladay guy. (By the way, Jays: Whoops.) So Hagen could have dramatized the details to the fullest. It's not uncommon for today's sports writer's to get to the point after impressing themselves with the sound of their own voice for about ten sentences.
Paul Hagen is not that kind of writer and anyone who reads him regularly knows it.
He leveled us today. The story is Cliff Lee is here and what more can we say? It's a huge day for the Phillies and Hagen appreciates the story over anything else.
I'm honoring him on my blog, because it's rare a writer takes themselves so completely out of the story and just presents the facts in a simple and elegant way.
Bill Lyon has always been the great Philadelphia example of elegant sportswriting, but Hagen is a different kind of writer. I like to say Lyon is the Phillies poet (did you ever read his Phils piece "The Heartbreakers?"), while Hagen writes with a kind of wink and a smile at it all. What they have in common is their humility and respect for the game or athlete they're writing about. And they respect their medium.
*If you're a baseball purist, you can't get any purer than Paul Hagen's writing.
http://www.philly.com/philly/sports/52152077.html
*Hey, did I bury my lead again? Rats.
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